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Friday
May072010

Ascent To Pandorous

So, word counts first (yes, plural).

First up is Book 1 (untitled space fantasy dealy)

This is the story of Alis who wakes up in the middle of a desert surrounded by men and women dressed as soldiers. Alis has no memory of who she is or where she is. She befriends an aging airship captain named Garrett Drake who vows to help her recover her memory. But what she learns about herself could cause problems for the entire world.

Word count is kinda low, but there's a reason for that. That reason is:

A second novel that I am working on. Ascent To Pandorous is the title of this book. It's about a young man named Castigan and his sister Valia. They live in a Dyson Sphere. This place is ruled by religion and the worship of a god named Pandorous which the sun at the center of the sphere is named after. Castigan devoutly believes and his sister, Valia, doesn't. In fact, she's rebellious to the point that she ends up getting herself killed. Castigan is slowly moved to lose his belief in Pandorous and discover the real reason for his society's forced religion.

I found it to be immensely helpful to work on two novels at once. I can jump between worlds as I see fit, never to be confined to one particular story. Of course, that'll stretch out the writing time by, well, a lot. But I'm ok with that, as long as the end result means I have a well written and entertaining novel.

So, yeah, nothing else to add to this. Next time, I'm thinking I might write a little bit about Steam.

Wednesday
Apr212010

The Great Debate

So, I'll start this post off the usual way, with my current word count.

Nearly 15,000 words. The main character, Alis, is slowly recovering bits of her memory. But it's coming back in ways that she's not always enjoying causing her to black out to the world around her. We've also met a new character Laila Boots, known to most people as Miss Boots. She is something of an information broker that our rugged airship captain Garret Drake has known for many, many years. So, it's getting interesting. And I'm looking forward to the next week's worth of writing because I see an epic city-destroying action sequence in my future.

In other news:

The gaming press has been alight with an editorial of sorts that Roger Ebert wrote recently where he stated that video games can never be art. Blogs like Kotaku went all out with this story even going so far as to post a rebuttal from a game designer who Ebert decided to write his article in response to.

All told, it's been a pretty epic week regarding this debate. Most gamers agree, as do I, that games indeed can be and have been art. But, ultimately, I think it's a pointless argument to have. Ebert just doesn't get gaming at all. He's readily admitted to not really having played any. He admits that his opinions are based on videos of somebody else playing. His opinion on gaming would be the same as if I based an opinion on movies based on what somebody else told me. You have to experience these things for yourself before you can really judge whether it's art or not.

But, I think the best rebuttal to Ebert was provided today by Tycho at Penny Arcade. I am going to quote my favorite part of Tycho's post below, but you can read the full post by going here.

...do we win something if we defeat him? Does he drop a good helm? Because I can't for the life of me figure out why we give a shit what that creature says.  He doesn't operate under some divine shroud that lets him determine what is or is not valid culture. He cannot rob you, retroactively, of wholly valid experiences; he cannot transform them into worthless things.

That pretty much sums up how I feel about the debate. Ebert isn't worth arguing with. Some of the games I've experienced have been transcendent experiences. Ebert can't take that away by making some misguided and worthless decree. I am convinced that games can be and are forms of art. Perhaps they take a form that some people don't yet understand.

In film's early days, movies weren't considered an art form. But, eventually, they became accepted as art. When you go see a movie like Citizen Kane, or Brazil, or A Clockwork Orange, you're experiencing art. The same will one day be fully accepted when people speak of games like Flower, or Fable II, or Shadow of the Colossus.

Wednesday
Apr142010

Writing the novel and The Birthday Massacre

I know, I'm terrible at keeping up a blog. Granted, when no one reads it, it placates the senses quite a bit. But I'm going to try to keep up with it at least weekly, even if it's just posting current word counts.

So, I'm working on my novel. I've set aside one idea to work on a different, better one. While it is currently without a title, it certainly has something of a synopsis. It's the story of a young woman named Alis (pronounced like Alice) who wakes up in a desert surrounded by the charred corpses of thousands of men and women dressed like soldiers. She has no memory of who she is, where she's from, where she is when she wakes up, what her purpose is, etc. The only thing she recalls is her first name, Alis. She is soon saved by an aging airship captain named Garrett Drake who agrees to try and help her recover her lost memories. This all leads to her discovering a terrible secret about her true origin and purpose.

Whew, that's a mouthful. The story takes place on two worlds. The main thrust of the story takes place on Omane, a desert planet with a frozen ocean at its southern pole. Orbiting Omane is a moon covered in lush green forests and sparkling blue seas. I currently don't know the name of this moon.

So, here's my current word count:

I wrote a measly 941 words today. I usually shoot for 1000 words a day, and I've been lucky over the past several days to surpass that count by 400-800 words. I am aiming for a 95000 word novel, but that's just a goal, really.

I like to write to music as well, and in fact will listen to one artist over and over during the writing of said novel (Porcupine Tree themed my NaNoWriMo novel). When I began this novel, I was listening to Shiny Toy Guns almost exclusively. In fact, the Frozen Oceans of Gallen at the southern pole of Omane was directly inspired by the STG song Frozen Oceans.

But, whilst streaming my Shiny Toy Guns station on Pandora, I discovered a new band I'd never heard of: The Birthday Massacre. I created a Birthday Massacre station as well.

For some reason, in a steampunk-inspired fantasy novel, goth-inspired synth-rock gets my creativity flowing and the words for this novel are coming forward with surprising ease. And, naturally, some Birthday Massacre  nods are making their way into the story. One of the cities in the novel is named the Chibi Province. The singer of TBM, she uses a stage name. Chibi - that's her in the middle.

The Birthday MassacreI think it's only appropriate to pay tribute to any who influence your creative works and I'm positive there will be a few other TBM references scattered throughout the story as it continues.

I'm going to make myself post far more often from now on.

So, until next time...

Monday
Jan252010

NaNoWriMo 2009

Every November, writers around the world, professional and amateur, participate in a month-long writing event called NaNoWriMo. That's National Novel Writing Month to the uninitiated. What is it? It's simple. For thirty days, you write a novel. By the end of those thirty days, your goal is 50,000 words. That's a short novel. Maybe 200 pages or so. The name of the game is quantity, not quality. The point is to do something you've never done before. Finish something that you've never thought you could possibly finish.

I'd known about NaNoWriMo for many years but never felt I had the time to participate, especially during the last few years, what with my desire to finish earning my design degree. But, since I've been job hunting for awhile, I felt I had the time finally to participate. So, I did.

Tada! As long as you write the full 50,000 words, you are declared a winner. That's the only requirement. 50,000 words. My novel, by the end of November, was just over 50,000 words. That's an average of 1,667 words a day. Most days I hit over 2,000 words, but that balanced it out for the days where I only wrote 500 words. I'm writing a steampunk-inspired science fantasy that takes place in a much, much larger universe. This story is really just the introduction to this place I'm building.

And my novel isn't even finished. I ended up writing myself into a corner. But after taking some time away from the novel to think about the story structure more clearly, I plan to jump back into the story from the beginning and tell the story correctly. I'm hoping to hit 100,000 words by the time I'm done writing. That's around 400 or so pages I think.

So, keep an eye here. I'll post updates as I go along. Maybe, one day, you'll be able to walk into a Borders bookstore, go over to the science fiction shelves and find a paperback novel with my name on it.

Monday
Jan252010

Star Trek: The Next Generation: Rewatched

I was going to do a season-by-season review of Star Trek: The Next Generation as I rewatched it, but then something funny happened. I got so engrossed watching it, seeing these old faces that I grew up with when I was younger, that I promptly forgot about blogging about it until now. This isn't exactly a review, per se. I'm not going to discuss the finer points of each episode. Instead, I'll be picking out a few particular themes that I felt still resonate today, despite how old the show is.

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